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    Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

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    Itake Kyuubi
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    Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Itake Kyuubi on Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:09 pm

    Basic Information:

    Name: Itake Kyuubi
    Nickname: Ita, Kyo
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Looks:
    Personality: Itake Kyuubi is a quiet he doesn't like talking that much at all. Though he is a a strong powerful ninja even though he doesn't talk much he is a nice genorous ninja.
    Likes: Itake likes defeating enemies and foes basicly battling.
    Dislikes: Doesn't like when people show off and stuff like that to Itake. So basicly rubbing it in his face.
    Extras: [None]

    Shinobi Information:

    Village: Sand
    Clan: [No Clan Provided]
    Rank: Chuunin
    Elements: Fire, Water
    Weapons: [None Yet]
    Summons: [None Yet]
    Jutsu:

    Background Information:

    Background: Itake has a great life until his brother betrayed his brother and left for his life for Itake's sake his brothers name is Satu. Itake's brother is 19 years old Itake is 15, Itake lives alone all by himself now all he does is probabaly study and train himself in the backyard of his home. Itake doesn't have friends cause he doesn't want to. Itake is a Anbu member Satu Itake's brother is a Missing-Nin
    Famiy: Nobody knows about Itake's family only Itake and his brother does his family died when he was only 3 years old though his brother lives.

    RP Sample: One day Itake was on a mission. He was suppose to defeat and find his brother Satu they found him on the third day. All Itake had to do was use his special ability which was his Sand Desert Rain cause it damages alot to the foe. Itake used it and attacked behind him but Sastu did a substitution jutsu but still got injuered ny the Sand Desert Rain. Satu used his Area gun attack where Satu attacks with fake bullets to the foe gets scared and runs off but since Itake is his little bro he wasn't scared cause he knows his moves. So Itake dodged and user Sand Trap so it traped him in a sand prison underground with no way to come back out. Then Itake quickly used Underground wood mole. Underground Wood mole means little thing goes under ground and shoots wooden mole bullets Satu got his on the chest but didn't get that much damage... To be continued (NOT CONTINUING TO MUCH TO TYPE)


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    Jutsus

    Post by Itake Kyuubi on Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:15 pm

    Fire Technniques

    Name: Burning Air Wave
    Rank: B
    Element: Fire
    Description: The user gathers chakra in their hands to form a blade of air that heats up to about 102 fahrenheit. Upon swinging it, the user sends a shockwave of hot air at the target.

    Name:Fire Style: Flames Circulated
    Rank: D
    Element: Fire
    Description: This jutsu circulates around with flames of fire and then the opponent is strangles lightnly not too tight though.

    Water Technniques

    Name: Water Release: Water smoke bomb
    Rank: D
    Element: Water
    Description: Just throws out bombs of water that explodes into smoke after in 7 seconds.

    Name: Water Release: water Fist
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: A small amound of water comes out like a fist and punches the opponent in any part of the body.

    Name: Water Release: Circlated Water Defence
    Rank: D
    Element: Water
    Description: A big batch of water in front of the user and keeps him/her safe from attacks that are not too powerful.


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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Shika-Kun on Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:17 pm

    May I ask if you are not from a country where english is a national language?
    Also, I would prefer a significantly longer history for ANBU.

    And your jutsu need descriptions of what they do
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Itake Kyuubi on Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:19 pm

    Actually i'll be a chuunin and i'm adding description now ok brb.
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Shika-Kun on Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:39 pm

    Flash Strikes
    Element: Lightning
    Rank: C
    Description: This ninjutsu let's you summon 5 large rods with a metal intrument on top of each of them (kind of like prongs). When the prongs start to spin around, it means it's about to get struck by lighting. When the prongs are struck by lighting, it starts to glow blue. The prongs then aim at your opponent and releases a giant bolt of lighting. If your opponent gets struck by each lighting bolt, it's a determined kill. Your opponent will only survive one bolt (depending on where he/ she gets hit).

    This seems far too strong for C-rank, in fact I'd consider it at least B rank, maybe A depending on if you need natural lightning to use it or not

    Lighting Strike
    Element: Lightning
    Rank: B
    Description: Also called the "Lightning and Thunder Combo", this Taijutusu relies on a Kumo-nin unleashing a rapid series of strikes into the opponent where if the target is able to evade the first strike the combo is done for, but if not they are severely damaged. The intensity of these blows leaves the opponent unable to feel, and thus the 'thunder' of the technique.

    You're not a Kumo-nin, meaning you probably shouldn't have Kumo techniques...

    Desert Grave
    Element: Sand
    Rank: B
    Description: A big wave of sand collaps and traps the enemy insides a big blods of sand underground.

    I don't understand this technique at all.. how does it push them underground, what's a blod, and is there anyway to break out of it?

    Also, I believe elemental combinations like sand and wood require either a bijuu or a kekkei genkai.
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Itake Kyuubi on Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:44 pm

    ok then i made a spelling mistake it's blob not blod and i changed the description so it makes sense now.
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Shika-Kun on Thu Jan 21, 2010 4:45 am

    I believe elemental combinations like sand and wood require either a bijuu or a kekkei genkai.
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Itake Kyuubi on Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:47 pm

    Ok then.... what elements can i use that don't requier any of those....
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Shika-Kun on Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:38 pm

    Raiton((lightning))

    Fuuton((wind))

    Suiton((water))

    Doton((earth))

    Katon((fire))
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Itake Kyuubi on Sat Jan 23, 2010 6:22 pm

    ok then thnx i'll change them..
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    Re: Itake Kyuubi (DONE WAITING FOR APPROVAL)

    Post by Shika-Kun on Sat Jan 23, 2010 6:47 pm

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